Worksheet 4.3 Peer Review Instruction

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- September 14, 2025 at 3:42 pm #2965
  gunadi.rustian@upi.edu
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  1. Exchange your introduction draft with a peer.
  2. Review the draft systematically using Swales’ CARS Model (Move 1–3).
  3. Provide at least five comments on their peer’s draft:
    
    Comment on clarity – Evaluate whether the argument is understandable and well-expressed.
    
    Comment on coherence – Assess whether the flow between sections or moves is logical and well-connected.
    
    Comment on journal alignment – Check whether the writing style, scope, and focus are appropriate for the target journal.
    
    References Accuracy (APA 7 style, relevance, credibility of sources)
    
    Writing Style & Grammar (formal tone, grammatical accuracy, sentence structure)
  After receiving comments, each student reflects on the feedback and identifies which suggestions to apply for improving their draft. This process helps students strengthen their writing, develop critical thinking, and understand diverse perspectives.
- November 15, 2025 at 10:19 pm #3329
  suci samiarti
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  Suci Samiarti
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  https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Ci8tmwiUD1ukRwfRpkn1_1hXxZEbVKAB/view?usp=sharing
- November 16, 2025 at 3:32 am #3330
  farahassyifagayo
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  FARAH ASSYFA GAYO
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  https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Oi-_8jCwgS9mF-az_mGcqFsP6AkHTE0A/view?usp=sharing
- November 16, 2025 at 4:58 am #3332
  hanifahnurula2802
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  Hanifah Nurul Azijah
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- November 16, 2025 at 5:23 am #3333
  Aulia Rahma Nurlita
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  Aulia Rahma Nurlita
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- November 16, 2025 at 8:10 am #3334
  Redapplerida
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  Rida Rahadathul Aisya Ardani
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  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ASxznI-50HbLPydIEJypAf9Chf0YqXsz/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=110524175782027043296&rtpof=true&sd=true
- November 16, 2025 at 11:32 am #3335
  syeifahma.salsa
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  Syeifh Fahma Salsabila (22220097)
  
  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jtuJUpV6uo2BzRrZjQzM7Vwc50TQvvSzz4KqSsxbxFA/edit?usp=sharing
- November 16, 2025 at 12:12 pm #3336
  Andina Fitri Irawan
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  ANDINA FITRI IRAWAN
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- November 16, 2025 at 2:11 pm #3342
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  WIDYA AULIA OCTAVIA
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- November 16, 2025 at 2:18 pm #3343
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  Kanna Ardanisa
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- November 16, 2025 at 2:21 pm #3344
  haifandn
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  Haifa Nenden Andriyana
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- November 16, 2025 at 2:32 pm #3345
  Delia Suci Maharani
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  Delia Suci Maharani
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- November 16, 2025 at 3:25 pm #3347
  Nadia Putri Azzahra
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  Nadia Putri Azzahra
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- November 16, 2025 at 4:20 pm #3348
  mutiaraazny1234
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  Mutiara Azny
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  https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ivXQh1E4tPGjSnXKI5jEDg_U2VdKqHTJ/edit?usp=drive_link&ouid=115767507843943210433&rtpof=true&sd=true
- November 16, 2025 at 8:07 pm #3351
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  Danisya Al Jura Pratiwi
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- November 16, 2025 at 10:01 pm #3352
  ratihnurlitaniati
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  Ratih Nurlita Niarti
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- November 16, 2025 at 10:25 pm #3353
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  Anisa Nur Arifah
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  https://docs.google.com/document/d/13QEFfFhas1atVTPSu3EdoQ7RbP6rPvEL/edit?usp=drivesdk&ouid=109616342516260922154&rtpof=true&sd=true
- November 16, 2025 at 11:31 pm #3354
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  Halda Vidya Srikandi Salsabila
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- November 17, 2025 at 1:54 am #3355
  nadyasara091
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  Nadya Salsabila Ramadhani
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- November 17, 2025 at 1:55 am #3356
  nadyasara091
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  Nadya Salsabila Ramadhani
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- November 17, 2025 at 3:14 am #3357
  ririnrohimat8
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  Ririn Rohimat
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- November 17, 2025 at 4:22 am #3358
  suci samiarti
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  Suci Samiarti
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- November 17, 2025 at 4:30 am #3359
  haifandn
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  Haifa Nenden Andriyana
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  Method: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LPYZDaFIJ3OS8RHDXbzeDPLA4ozEm0p1/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=100260940010663605240&rtpof=true&sd=true
- November 17, 2025 at 4:42 am #3360
  Aulia Rahma Nurlita
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  Link Methodology: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1DgaY_STnLl5ePyVGXDrTU7zKtvwovSGQ/view?usp=drivesdk
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